Yearbook layout preview

good white space : The picture don't really go around in a pinwheel and go over each other. There is also no dominant picture. The heading is large, but because of the color choice not really attention getting. Even though the side has more white space a normal site should have, I really like the way they used it. I think the side does lead to the pictures and there a no other distractions that could the viewer lead to other elements of the side.

good pictures : There is a good dominant picture. Not good is that they left no space in between the text and the pictures on the left, it seems very crammed together. There is also a too big whit space where the gutter is.

good art : They changed the pictures in form, what woul make a normal side most probably very weird looking, but in this case I liked how they worked their pictures into the page. I think it looks very creative and the "white" space was also used wisely. There is no Horizontal Eyeline. There are more than 5-7 pictures , and no dominant text.

good text : here we also can't really find an horizontal eyeline. They left enough space in between the text and the headlines are dominant. They also broke the norm of a normal page with their interesting choice of textboxes :) The numbers in the boxes lead pretty well to the next point, without them I would probably be lost on the page. No dominant text.